Borderline OK.
Got to be honest did expect a little more from this, was'nt the funniest thing I have ever watched but I have seen way worse. And I have to agree with the other reviewers here, the extras were what got you a decent score. Not your greatest work but still decent. Maybe the collabs are'nt your thing, stick to your solo submissions. With that said dont stop, you certainly have talent and you seem to improve almost every flash you make. Cheers, GJ.